A poem written by a tired guy after work at 1:20 am
ORGANIZED
Objects
Neatly and
Zealously
Arranged in
Engineered
Groups
Intended to
Reduce
Disorder
Objects
Neatly and
Zealously
Arranged in
Engineered
Groups
Intended to
Reduce
Disorder
posted by Kyle | 10:30 PM
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That poem was so good, it made me want to do cartwheels and then bang my head against a rock. Seriously, I enjoyed it. Like, a lot. I don't exactly "know" poetry like I do other forms of writing, but that was awesome from my point of view. You said more in those few lines than a lot of people probably could have said in an essay, and, for me, that's what makes a great poem. Find somewhere that'll publish it. Also, I want to lick you.
P.S. The only reason I deleted the original comment is because I accidentally pasted half of an IM convo into it, somehow. My bad.
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